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Author:  ThexTallxNinja3 [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:55 am ]
Post subject:  POF Profile

Hey guys.

Brand new to the forums and just wanted to get some input on my POF profile. I've tried using some of the openers without much success so I figured it may be useful to examine how I could spruce up my profile. Any input would be greatly appreciated.

Username is: Marquettefan8810

Author:  Benedict Tyler [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:26 pm ]
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Hey there,

I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way.

You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online.

Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples?

If you need more help / advice let me know.

Check my link for more tips

Good luck bud!

Author:  ThexTallxNinja3 [ Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:37 pm ]
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Quote:
Hey there,

I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way.

You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online.

Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples?

If you need more help / advice let me know.

Check my link for more tips

Good luck bud!
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one.

If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes."

Author:  ThexTallxNinja3 [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 2:20 am ]
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Just redid my profile after watching Bravo's video.

Should I shorten if further?

Author:  dlightmen [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 7:14 am ]
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Curious. Are these working?

Author:  ThexTallxNinja3 [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:00 am ]
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Curious. Are these working?
Those openers? I didnt have any luck. After redoing my profile to Bravo's specs I have had some success, so far at least. I started using the opener "Are you one of those girls who takes FOREVER to do their hair and makeup or does it just look that way naturally?" with the subject: "Serious Question..."

Got 4 responses so far. Sent messages back for two of them. It is almost 3am here so we will see what happens later today.

Author:  dlightmen [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:47 am ]
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Curious. Are these working?
Those openers? I didnt have any luck. After redoing my profile to Bravo's specs I have had some success, so far at least. I started using the opener "Are you one of those girls who takes FOREVER to do their hair and makeup or does it just look that way naturally?" with the subject: "Serious Question..."

Got 4 responses so far. Sent messages back for two of them. It is almost 3am here so we will see what happens later today.
I was curious about that profile. If it really worked. Please keep the thread updated with your findings.

Oh.. I saw another guy in here was using it as well... Probably a lot of people are.

Author:  Benedict Tyler [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:18 pm ]
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Quote:
Quote:
Hey there,

I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way.

You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online.

Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples?

If you need more help / advice let me know.

Check my link for more tips

Good luck bud!
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one.

If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes."
Firstly dont worry about the 'bitches'. Some woman just respond badly to stuff and aren't worth the time. Just one other quick point...are those 20-30 emails your sending actually getting opened/read? Hot girls get hundreds of emails a day (I'm not kidding) so dont be surprised if your ass gets deleted before seeing the light of day.

BTW if you want me to design a profile for you let me know.

Author:  ThexTallxNinja3 [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 6:02 pm ]
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Hey there,

I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way.

You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online.

Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples?

If you need more help / advice let me know.

Check my link for more tips

Good luck bud!
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one.

If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes."
Firstly dont worry about the 'bitches'. Some woman just respond badly to stuff and aren't worth the time. Just one other quick point...are those 20-30 emails your sending actually getting opened/read? Hot girls get hundreds of emails a day (I'm not kidding) so dont be surprised if your ass gets deleted before seeing the light of day.

BTW if you want me to design a profile for you let me know.
I've been testing out Bravo's profile specs and have had some good success with it. I havent had girls messaging me like he claims to have constantly. If you see any way my profile could be improved by all means let me know.

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