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| Author: | ThexTallxNinja3 [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:55 am ] |
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Hey guys. Brand new to the forums and just wanted to get some input on my POF profile. I've tried using some of the openers without much success so I figured it may be useful to examine how I could spruce up my profile. Any input would be greatly appreciated. Username is: Marquettefan8810 |
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| Author: | Benedict Tyler [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:26 pm ] |
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Hey there, I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way. You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online. Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples? If you need more help / advice let me know. Check my link for more tips Good luck bud! |
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| Author: | ThexTallxNinja3 [ Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:37 pm ] |
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Quote: Hey there,
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one. I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way. You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online. Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples? If you need more help / advice let me know. Check my link for more tips Good luck bud! If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes." |
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| Author: | ThexTallxNinja3 [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 2:20 am ] |
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Just redid my profile after watching Bravo's video. Should I shorten if further? |
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| Author: | dlightmen [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 7:14 am ] |
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Curious. Are these working? |
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| Author: | ThexTallxNinja3 [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:00 am ] |
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Quote: Curious. Are these working?
Those openers? I didnt have any luck. After redoing my profile to Bravo's specs I have had some success, so far at least. I started using the opener "Are you one of those girls who takes FOREVER to do their hair and makeup or does it just look that way naturally?" with the subject: "Serious Question..." Got 4 responses so far. Sent messages back for two of them. It is almost 3am here so we will see what happens later today. |
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| Author: | dlightmen [ Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:47 am ] |
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Quote: Quote: Curious. Are these working?
Those openers? I didnt have any luck. After redoing my profile to Bravo's specs I have had some success, so far at least. I started using the opener "Are you one of those girls who takes FOREVER to do their hair and makeup or does it just look that way naturally?" with the subject: "Serious Question..." Got 4 responses so far. Sent messages back for two of them. It is almost 3am here so we will see what happens later today. Oh.. I saw another guy in here was using it as well... Probably a lot of people are. |
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| Author: | Benedict Tyler [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:18 pm ] |
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Quote: Quote: Hey there,
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one. I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way. You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online. Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples? If you need more help / advice let me know. Check my link for more tips Good luck bud! If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes." BTW if you want me to design a profile for you let me know. |
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| Author: | ThexTallxNinja3 [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 6:02 pm ] |
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Quote: Quote: Quote: Hey there,
I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one. I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way. You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online. Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples? If you need more help / advice let me know. Check my link for more tips Good luck bud! If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes." BTW if you want me to design a profile for you let me know. |
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