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Author:  SmoothOp [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Online Gurus

Please take 5 min and evaluate my POF profile. I haven't had much luck and haven't used it in about a year. Went on dates with about 10 girls off POF. 2 were actually worth the effort.

Tell me what to add, to take out ect.. Pictures are pretty crappy and I will eventually change them.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=21592603

Any comments welcome

Author:  bullshitter1 [ Fri Nov 04, 2011 12:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Online Gurus

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Please take 5 min and evaluate my POF profile. I haven't had much luck and haven't used it in about a year. Went on dates with about 10 girls off POF. 2 were actually worth the effort.

Tell me what to add, to take out ect.. Pictures are pretty crappy and I will eventually change them.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=21592603

Any comments welcome
hey man..
well my 2 cents worth...
"Some people describe me as one bad a$$ dude. In my spare time,.. I like starting forest fires, stealing hand bags from poor old ladies, fist fights and wrestling un-tamed tigers for sport."

id cancel the forest fires bit...and the mugging old ladies bit...i know your trying to set the mood that your a joker but those two jokes are gonna be offensive to a lot of peeps...especially women...OK

the other part id drop is your list of requirements for a woman,,...every woman ive ever met would be turned down if i said dont tell me about ur crazy past etc...if your looking to fuck around who cares if they are crazy, women are crazy didnt u know already....u gotta drop your list of jokey requirements to attract more women...just say shit like ur looking for a down to earth cool lady, who likes to do yoga ..trust me that equals a banging body.

your pictures...id change them aswell...your looking to hard to be a player in the white shirt...the other pic makes you look like ur sat alone in a bar...not attractive.
better to show a pic of you actually doing something...skating down a hill or some shit.


thats my analysis.

Author:  SmoothOp [ Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:04 pm ]
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hey man..
well my 2 cents worth...
"Some people describe me as one bad a$$ dude. In my spare time,.. I like starting forest fires, stealing hand bags from poor old ladies, fist fights and wrestling un-tamed tigers for sport."

id cancel the forest fires bit...and the mugging old ladies bit...i know your trying to set the mood that your a joker but those two jokes are gonna be offensive to a lot of peeps...especially women...OK

Yeah I can see how that can be offensive.
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the other part id drop is your list of requirements for a woman,,...every woman ive ever met would be turned down if i said dont tell me about ur crazy past etc...if your looking to fuck around who cares if they are crazy, women are crazy didnt u know already....u gotta drop your list of jokey requirements to attract more women...just say shit like ur looking for a down to earth cool lady, who likes to do yoga ..trust me that equals a banging body.
Yeah I'm sounding pretty negative eh?? I had wierd bitches telling me crazy fucking personal shit on first dates. But prob should get rid of that. Was just trying to come off selective.
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your pictures...id change them aswell...your looking to hard to be a player in the white shirt...the other pic makes you look like ur sat alone in a bar...not attractive.
better to show a pic of you actually doing something...skating down a hill or some shit.
Yeah I know activity pics are good. I am too lazy to physically go out and take pictures. And Leave my fucking lame shirt alone lol!! It was on vacation and extremely hot haha.

Thanks for the comments

Author:  Resus [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:07 am ]
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I travel as much as I can .....spots like Vegas. All depends if I want to relax, soak in some culture or who I am going with. But always a blast:)
I feel thats way too long and I zoned out. I'd cut the content of your About me in half, maybe more. Do you have any pictures of you doing something cool? You travel, you must..

I don't know how I feel about the disqualifier list. I go about it in a different way in my profile. Not saying I'm right or anything. I said "READ HERE. If you're on this site for your daily dose of compliments, you've come to the WRONG page!"

Anyway, practice makes perfect man

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