Ok... a couple of suggestions:
1. you need to get some better pics... the ones you have make you look like a bit of a loner... maybe some with friends, at parties, in some girls company, and doing some exciting activities.
2. Don't tell the girls you're awesome ; show them. Instead of saying "Let me tell you about some of the things that make me awesome...", say "People ask me what I like to do for fun". The rest is good and original.
3. Fill in the first date profile with something a little more concrete. Here's what I have on mine:
"I don't have sex on the first date, but if we're not actually dating, then it might be OK. I'm not for beginners, and if you are a beginner, I recommend gaining some entry-level experience with my friend Alex, who could use a date (!). I don't have time for petty drama and emotional hysterics. I do what I want, when I want ; but I'm more of a giver than a taker. I like simple men, and complicated women.
You should definitely message me if:
You have something interesting to say or discuss ; you are a genuinely good person ; or you are gorgeous. Ideally, you'd exhibit a combination of the three
"4. change your profession to something a bit more whimsical (seal trainer/lap dancer...etc)... same with your interests
Just my 2 cents... Hope this helps.