Music... I gotta agree with curse... I'd scrap that routine completely... it starts ok the hair thing could be a little neg if you say it right... it just seems like an AFC combo to me though... sorry man

I thought that the build her back up after the hair thing was pretty good.

"The way you dress and look"

But it takes away value from your game it sounds good but i wouldnt use it. You are trying to justify why you were walking up and talking to her when you dont have to do that at all.

The nose neg is very dangerous.

the only thing i may use is the opening aspect of this routine..

i.e... "FIONA!! what the hell is wrong with your hair today?!... oh shit sorry you looked like my friend".. and just move on from there

everything else said seemed pretty incongruent

Ok here's one i thought of. but wanted to see if works. so u guys can try it out n see for urselves n feed back to us.


U start of by going to the mall n select HB. Walk up to HB n say
You: Hey hi Fiona. Oh sorry I tot u were my fren Fiona. U really look a lot like her. The way u walk, the way u dress.

I was laughing from over ther coz i tot u were her. The funny thing that stood out about her was her hair. She'd do it in this funny way like a little girl hair.
She'd dress corporate n all coz she works as an executive but her hairs really funny like yours.

So what u're working as?

HB: Admin

You: Admin. interesting looking at papers all day and looking sexy in the office. lol

Keep talking to her.

U CAN ALSO SAY:
It's funny how people can look so alike. When was the last time u did this same blooper? lol

THEN U CAN NEG HER BY SAYG:
Oh but yeah there's a little difference betwn u n her. You nose is bigger.
Oh i mean in a beautiful sort of way. Bigger, sharper noses r more better:) (give that joking look)

Actually this script can be versatile. It can be used to approach anyone anywhere, not only at the mall. U can use it at bus stop, mcdonalds, or juz in the street. Its spontaneous, becoz u can juz say u got the wrong person, but then u keep fluff talking the HB n eventually she'll talk n be more open after your story telling n pateerning etc etc.



I'L continue this post when i get feed back and a few more ideas.

peace

I dont like it... I wont use it but good start tho. Maybe after twinking it over a while you can get it tight.

First of all you hit on her within the first few seconds of opening by saying "Admin. interesting looking at papers all day and looking sexy in the office. lol"

The neg you suggested, I dont think its going to fly. You are attacking her as a person and hardly have no antidote for it.