Hey all! Constructive criticism is in dire need, I messed up on this sarge and for the life of me, can't correct it. I wrote it out on paper while camping, so I'll transcript it exactly how I have it:
It's some horrible fking hour in the morning, I'm camping with buddies and just chased a bear out of camp with a frying pan, so I can't get back to bed. Anyways, Last night at the dock parry, met this girl Megan, or somethin like that (sufferin from seducers paradox badly). Originally I thought I was too drunk to gamre, But I realized I was just lazy and making excuses, so I decided to play in the subtle tactics. AMOG'd most of the tool guys in the group, pretty much became AMOG, but was under constant power threat from this hippie lookin guy. It wasn't even like I could AMOG him, he never set himself up to be knocked down. I started to run the best friends test on the target and obstacle, but some drunk bufoon interrupted and the girls never asked again so I dropped it. After DHV'n a bit, I isolated the target, via a move to a quiet ish seat at the end of the dock. Passed kino test. She was throwing IOI's at me, but the obstacles prevented a kiss. I think I passed too much time after reaching the social hook point and gaining interest. Ran the cube test, then the Dean-modified Horoscope statement (A spin off of my brother Jersey's horoscope statement). It WORKED. She jokingly kept on punching me and sayin "fuck you for gettin in my head so easy Dean!"
Since it was on the end of the dock, I pulled my IVD astronomy routine. Tossin in the negs, but in hindsight I should've been more of an asshole! Doggy dinner bowl looks constantly. Then, all of a sudden, she just kinda switched frames to talk with that hippie guy that was a AMOG threat (how the hell do you AMOG the nice one's!?!? without lowering yourself or letting your intentions be known?) gotta get better at that. We took off to go blow up some homemade "fireworks" I made, and ran into her on the path on the way out. She came on strong and playful attitude, even after talking with that other AMOG (gotta mean I meant somethin hahah). Before all of this, I ran my own NLP "safe place" routine, and got great results. There was definite attraction, but I'm not sure if I need more comfort or more asshole? But, in order to keep "edge" and prevent her from straying to the other AMOG, what could've I done? A kiss was definately not possible, unfortunately. She's an HB8. Afterwards, I learned she's happy with her boyfriend back home (props to her for that), but still, damn...That's my field report and sticking points. Any comments or help?\
Cheers,
Dean