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Author:  preps [ Thu May 17, 2012 3:05 am ]
Post subject:  much needed critique

New to the forums but i have been studying pickup for about 6 months now. To give you some background about me i always tend to approach the room as a leader and house parties is the majority of my sarges. Been watching a lot of David D. and Adam L. and decided that the approach that always works for me is to overtly run a room and the people in it as i genuinely seem to be liked because of my cocky funny natural approach. Now i say natural but, i do throw some funny lines i've learned around due to the fact that girls love them.

So i arrive at a friend of mines' apartment he was having a couple people over for drinks it was a fun little turnout about 20 people or so. I come in and immediately give a large energy welcome to some friends i see (couple girls couple guys like that fuckin matters). Any way this guy who was a totaly dick to one of the girls who is a good friend of mine brought a girl she was cute some HB7 cheerleader. I personally dont really like the guy and was running game on the other girls before I went with her.
Through a series of odd drunken events i end up in the room with some other girl this girl is completely sober HB7 extrovert really feeling her had a lot of DHV and IOI's with this one was in a small room with her and 3 of her very unnactractive friends she is showing alot of rapport but fail to Iso so i leave back to play beer pong like i was earlier (me and my buddy just won 7 and a row and we're really feeling like gods at this point no big deal)
Then me and the cheerleader really hit it off had good negs and DHV'ed kino'd really well the guy she came with was kind of annoyed and she wanted a picture with me that he just injected his self into out of jealousy. While hes trying to get just the right picture we are playing grab ass behind his back. She jumps on my team for beer pong and is horrible good spot for negs dhv ex.
So the night is coming to a close now and my drunk ass needs a ride home so she offers for him to take me and being an afc the poor guy agrees (feelin pretty bad for him at this point but being horny beat my pity) my friend came too and the dick made sure to sit her in the front. while my buddy drukenly argues with him im seductively playing with her hands, and after he gets dropped off she literally hops into the back seat like a fucking rabbit. so naturally im moving my hands up her thigh gently squeezing, and i manage to finger her for awhile as he looks back and asks what shes doing grabbing her hair in pleasure i say she is just sleeping. I remove my hands from the confines of her moist tight cooch, as she jackie chan kung fu grips my fuckin arm with her legs i was home... and she was horny and i had no option but to leave sexless.
End up adding her on FB opening with i saw through your plan you were trying to take advantage of me in my drunken state. very sly misses _______

went well got her number and now for the worst part of my game im horrible at txt and phone game and end up fumbeling for an encounter. Here is the convo and i would gladly appreciate tips and criticism

Me:who was that sexy man you were just talking to
her:hmm i believe his name was Preps? Am i correct
me: So you admit it i hear this____ girl he is talking to is kinda cute a big dork tho (probably shouldn't have used cute)
her:really? she sounds like a catch (; haha
me: uh oh a little full of our selves. High maintenance alert code red! Haha
her: Lol no need to over react im only joking.
her again:Plus there is nothing wrong with a little self confidence:P
me:ur so easy to tease i love it aren't you like 17 or something :P(i know guys i'm a horrible fucking person)
her: yes lol
me:Oh no im 20 so should i pick u up after your nap of after you finish up playing barbies i guess i can babysit but i draw the line at story time.
her: lol way to be a jerk >.<
me: isn't confidence sexy haha what days are you free this week
her: any day accept wendesday
me: well i need to go to the mall to get some things so you should tag along i'm super busy and have finals this week so i will tell you what day i'm not swamped with stuff and we could do lunch after if i like you enough.
her: sure, why not lol (really wasn't happy with this response)
me: O stop hiding your enthusiasm i know how excited you are
her: Your funny haha. (i take this as sarcasm)
me:hey i will call you tm i'm kinda busy right now.
NEXT DAY
me: i just cheked my schedule and i'm free thursday i can pick u up around 2 so try not to get all sexied up and wear the boots that take 45 minutes to get on lol
her: well thursday im busy til seven /:
me: well this is just a bad week with finals and work next week is much better i know ur dying to see me but when do u get our of school
her: next week is my last week
me: unless u wanna just say fuck it and hang tm my final starts at 4 no guarantees though
NEXT DAY Can't do it today forgot my buddy was throwing a cookout thing today
her: no problem (another answer i wasnt thrilled to receive)

After this interaction i have class the next day and call her when i am on my way back from school so i am preocuppied and have my mind on other things besides her but she doesnt answer I DO NOT CALL AGAIN like a typical AFC. I thought this interaction was alot tighter game but might have been to cocky funny The very next day i send her a txt again saying

me:I drove by ______ (our highschool that i already graduated from) on the way to school and i couldnt help thinking of you... and how bad you are at beer pong lol
her:Lmbo, yea i have like no hand to eye coordination >.< that was only like the second time i've ever played.
me: If u ever want to be with me again we have to get you better that means 5 hour wrist workouts at the gym.
her: i need practice :p
me:Well if ur looking for lessons i got you w8 we are still talking about beer bong right
her: Yes, we're talking about beer pong lmbo
me: O ok dont go telling other girls i'm offering lessons i dont want my phone blowing up today haha ;)
her: lol my lips are sealed! ;) (seen the rapport and figured fuck it)
me: not for long im going to have them nice and puckered up because ya know we need more family friendly kisses lets get out there and show those sinners how we do
her: Lmbo! Your funny. We'll see about that :P (seen that as a dhv on her part)
me: o you thought i meant with you whoops i just meant we should spread the word :) lol
her:Ohhhh I see :P lol (feeling the convo die now)
me: i have a question of the upmost importance its life or death so don't ask questions...lemon or lime
her:uhm lime? lol
me: good choice your a lifesaver
her: lol what if i would of said lemon?
me: Unspeakable horrors
her: haha oh okay
me: i will talk to you later its starting to get pretty packed here and these people are attention whores lol price of being sociable (DHV)
her:kk

That was the last thing i sent her and it was two days ago now im thinking of doing a freeze out for the rest of the week and then calling her asking if i could just pick her up for the mall thing i mention earlier surprise with bowling as there is a place in the mall. Like i said appreciate any criticism or advice.

your boy preps

Author:  tixx [ Thu May 17, 2012 3:19 am ]
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to me it looks like you where doing a great job until you cancelled plans for your mates cookout thing, and this could of thrown her off, its great to look busy but if you want to get the job done you do have to make some time for the actually date etc.

great job fooling around with her with the another bloke busy driving in the front seat!

Author:  preps [ Thu May 17, 2012 7:11 am ]
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Quote:
to me it looks like you where doing a great job until you cancelled plans for your mates cookout thing, and this could of thrown her off, its great to look busy but if you want to get the job done you do have to make some time for the actually date etc.

great job fooling around with her with the another bloke busy driving in the front seat!
Duely noted nice fresh bit of criticism that I will most definetly apply after the freeze out.

Author:  preps [ Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:38 am ]
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UPDATE:
Everything seem to be alot tighter from here on in there has been alot i've learned in the small amount of time since this was originally posted.

I managed to start a open relationship with this girl that was completely mutual and even able to grab a couple more girls sarging on the side

Not much else going on worth updating but having a damn good time living life to the fullest

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