haha, i think it s pretty good
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| Author: | Megastream [ Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:21 pm ] |
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Hey guys, i recently thought of a opener/neg,it hasnt been field tested,so i dont know how well it works.You need to have your target wearing a bright or flashy shirt. PUA: Hey can i get a female opinon on something. HB:Hey,yeah sure. PUA:Do you think guys or girls can hold a secret better?(Opener) HB:Guys or Grils(doesnt matter either way) PUA:its not secret my eye was caught on you,or it could be that colourful shirt your wearing(Neg) Comment and Feedback please,as i said it hasnt been field tested,so im not sure how it would work |
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| Author: | smudge [ Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:05 pm ] |
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the last line is too strong i believe... but a nice opener |
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| Author: | silvertongue [ Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:32 am ] |
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The last line sounds too much like an average PU line. |
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| Author: | Megastream [ Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:33 pm ] |
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Yeah,the last line defently needs some help,but with a little help it could be used well |
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| Author: | RecklessVic [ Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:47 am ] |
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this could go multiple thread if you mixed it with something..... the who lies more opener right after then come back and discuss the similarities or something in that catagory.. is it ok if I test it??? |
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| Author: | Zenethica [ Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:39 pm ] |
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haha, i think it s pretty good
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| Author: | Megastream [ Tue Jan 15, 2008 7:59 pm ] |
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yeah for sure man,thats why i posted it,to see how well it works,keep me posted how it does. 
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| Author: | Sixx (aka sixstringplaya) [ Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:03 am ] |
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ya leave that last line out tho, it makes it sound like a lead up to a cheesy one liner. |
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| Author: | babylon [ Mon Jan 28, 2008 11:22 pm ] |
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Im only new, but i agree with the rest of the guys. the last line sounds like a cheeesy pick up line. the opener would work really great with sumthing that relates to it afterwoulds. hope that made sense ha.. 
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| Author: | Megastream [ Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:29 am ] |
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Yeah for sure,I posted it so I could get feedback to make it a good opener,so im defently open to suggestions.
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