This was my "Day Game" dress today.
- Open to critique. Anything I could improve upon.
- What's hard to see is my angel wings necklace (I started one convo today when a HB6 at work noticed it).
- The hat always gets good comments.
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| Author: | Holden [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:35 am ] |
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This was my "Day Game" dress today. - Open to critique. Anything I could improve upon. - What's hard to see is my angel wings necklace (I started one convo today when a HB6 at work noticed it). - The hat always gets good comments. |
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| Author: | Nova [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:28 am ] |
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If it were me I would lose one of the shirts. Probably the blue one cuz the one underneath looks like a slick button down that would go great with the hat. Otherwise that looks like a pretty legit set up to me |
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| Author: | deadman [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:04 am ] |
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i disagree, i think a short sleeve shirt over a long one looks cool. I would roll my sleeves up a bit,like half way up my forearms. hat looks cool, wish i had the courage to wear a hat D M |
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| Author: | Holden [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:10 am ] |
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I'm basing this one kinda off of Style. Of all the videos I've seen of him, he's usually wearing a T-Shirt over a dress shirt. |
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| Author: | El'>Presidente<&quo [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:08 am ] |
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Peacocking? I believe that word is derived from peacock... which should mean dress of extremely extravagantly. I say the hat fits you, but yea lose the blue shirt and roll up the sleeves to elbow. Wear a bling bling watch, one that shines and creates attention. Probably would want to wear a few shiny well designed bracelets on the other hand. Slicker jeans would be good too, those kinda look normal to me and a decorated belt with a BIG sexy buckle. Fits your size. Add a few rings to your fingers too, those usually spark curiousity. Just make sure they're not feminine rings, otherwise you'd be made fun of, I never did though so don't think it'd happen. Finally, last but not least, wear your clothes with an Attitude and Confidence. That usually reels the girls in like fishies. No matter how crazy you look, those two reels in the girls like nothing else. |
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| Author: | Holden [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:24 am ] |
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Where anywhere in these posts did I say I was peacocking? I know howto peacock and I understand the theory better than you apparently. Peacock is designed to create INTEREST, not look like a traveling vomitous of glitter. You'll also note I said this is for 'Day Game'. If it was night I'd add my neon/bright colour shirts, black nail polish, googles, and assorted accessories and props. |
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| Author: | El'>Presidente<&quo [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:06 am ] |
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Ah of course you are, I'm still new at this I didn't really see the "Day Game" thing. But so tell me, I got the idea of peacocking right I suppose, though I never really had someone to look into. Perhaps you can give me an example of "Night Game"? |
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| Author: | Chikito [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:29 pm ] |
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I dont mean to offened, but by the look of the picture your body isnt a strong point. Wearing vertical stripes makes you taller, horizontal shorter. Lose the horizontal stripes it makes you look squat. Wear verticle stripes. Otherwise the hat is good I love it. Jeans, maybe a darker shade, i have the same problem as you. Big thighs so darker trousers always better! Plus that shade of jean is borring! And get nice belt to go with your outfit. One piece of advice you can take or leave, its totally up to you. But I reckon a little more facial hair, at the moment you have a bit of a baby face (haha no offense) but some darker sideburns would better suit the hat. Just keep them well trimed. |
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| Author: | Holden [ Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:15 pm ] |
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Thanks Chikito, thats what I needed to hear. As for the facial hair, its a no go as my job won't allow it. |
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| Author: | xfman [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:27 am ] |
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In addition to Chikito post I will say that you should use a suit with the hat. Try to look more to the celebrity / rockstar style:  In the other hand the hat is a great prop and a Lock-On item so use it as your advantage in Peacocking and Locking on Girls |
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| Author: | CaLib0i [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:45 am ] |
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Men's Warehouse...pick up a blazer. You're gonna like it, I guarantee it. |
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| Author: | Holden [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:53 am ] |
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Yeah, I've gotten to a couple Men's Fashion stores already and checked out the blazer's there. I found a nice Black Corderoy one that would mix nice with jeans. Problem is affording it right now (Money issues). Also, you can't see, but this whole summer I've been wearing sandals. But I've got some black dress shoes picked out and have a nice Brown pair with matching belts. The only problem is, every popular bar in my city doesn't allow hats! But still, I DO want to get a nice blazer for my 'Night Game' and eventually I will get one. So I'm aware of the problem right now. |
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| Author: | LoveMonkey [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:57 am ] |
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The look I usually see is when the long sleeved shirt is a bit tighter... Have you tried that look? to me its a little cleaner looking |
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| Author: | Trivial [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:05 am ] |
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honestly, its not the clothes that is the big problem... just by going by this picture my first impression which is key is a very non confident computer geekish person. Let me explain why. Your shoulders are rolled forward which shows your not alpha male and hiding your body and your head is forward like you stare at computer all day. Im not trying to be a dick but Im trying tell tell you what others first impressions is going to be and thats what matters. but on clothes.... the blue shirts has to go and everything else is okay buy deisel pants if you want a better fitting pant... i think you would look good in a suit or blazer.... look like you are owner or rich ass at the club i think is your style i hope this helps dont take anything i say to offence |
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| Author: | JMart [ Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:32 am ] |
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Quote: I dont mean to offened, but by the look of the picture your body isnt a strong point. Wearing vertical stripes makes you taller, horizontal shorter. Lose the horizontal stripes it makes you look squat. Wear verticle stripes.
Otherwise the hat is good I love it. Jeans, maybe a darker shade, i have the same problem as you. Big thighs so darker trousers always better! Plus that shade of jean is borring! And get nice belt to go with your outfit. One piece of advice you can take or leave, its totally up to you. But I reckon a little more facial hair, at the moment you have a bit of a baby face (haha no offense) but some darker sideburns would better suit the hat. Just keep them well trimed. agreed, also if you do vertical stripes get a black dress shirt instead of the white....i think the white looks too plain......mayb even a pinstripe black shirt and definately work on your posture...i dont have much room to talk because mine is horrible lol but im workin on mine too |
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