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| Author: | Asmodai [ Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Pattern language thread |
I just posted this in another subforum, and the NLP board can really use some more activity, so I'm reposting it here: I heard: Quote: You can eat a big meal, but you don't want to just shove it all down your throat. You want to have a taste, and when you find that you like it, take small bites until you end up finishing it.
and I thought of altering it in the following way:Quote: Sometimes, you've just got a big plate in front of you. It's just like when you're eating a big meal. You don't want to just shove it all down your throat! First you have a taste to see that you like it. Then you take it in little by little*, and as you really get into it, you're taking in more more at a time, until, finally, you've got the entire meal inside of you.
Underline is pointing at your dick! Star is sliding the gesture downward. For "entire meal," I'm thinking of a grand circular gesture ending at the navel.Post your constructive criticism if you have any, even edit someone else's pattern to your liking, and post your own for someone else to work with. Riff on any theme that happens to be on your mind |
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| Author: | Mind Hacker [ Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:01 pm ] |
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I'd start with the Snack Quizz from SS 3.0, then I'd transition to your pattern, but I'd add more sensory rich descriptions and hypnotic language like this: Have you ever ate a big meal? I don't know if you can picture a big plate in front of you. And when you're eating a big meal you don't want to just shove it all down your throat! You want to put this in your mouth slowly, and really FEEL THE TASTE, as you begin to put the first piece inside your mouth, you FEEL THE JUICE DRIPPING, and you GET PLEASURE, to the point when you just want to put it all deep inside. It's like an explosion of pleasure. That's the moment when the time stops and you know you have everything you always wanted in front of you, a step away to really MAKE THIS YOURS... now... it's an amazing experience, isn't it? |
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